Thursday, October 23, 2014

Essay 2-01b: Own relax room

Own room is make us relax,  many people like to any thing to do own room. for example some of people sleeping, studying, listen to music, and so on. own room is very important for many people, because own room is can keep personal.

some of people don’t have own
room, also some of people want have a own rooms every day. Many people, also have a own room. room, but some of don’t have a own rooms people need can relax room.


many people spend every day with  parents. so could not keep Many people, also have a own room.
many children personal.



Own room have  good points.
first If  children fait with parents, children don’t have to meet perrents.so some of  fating children become happy. some of children also don’t have to go out own room, and some of having own room  people can watch TV long time. But some of having own room people have to clean always .
so also many people  feel  busy.


second, many people have a own room, but some of people don’t have a own room. so they often visit other

people’s own room and live their. many people say “share house” . always come to people room is also people feel relax and don’t want to do anything.


Third, own room is also unique and  personal corer. so many people feel relax , sleep and interesting. on the other hands, there are a lot of interesting  things, so also some of people could not concentrate to study . for example PC,TV,and CD.


In conclusion, own room can keep personal , share the room for many people, can concentrate to study. so own room have good  many points, but on the other hands own room have a little bad points. because also many people couldn’t concentrate to study in interesting and relax own room.
so some of people are couldn’t study, If some of people study in own room , they do other kind of interesting some thing. So many people mustn’t put a lot of things in own room, because some of people feel don’t want to do anything in the own room. for example PC, Book, and music. If some thing people play to PC, Book and music, they couldn’t concentrate to study.




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